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Rickshaw Man by ~diamond-on-the-water:icondiamond-on-the-water:



Rickshaw Man

Sun rains down
from a sky between buildings,
as he hauls the weight of poverty behind him.

Feet pound the asphalt
to the beat of hunger.

A race for survival,
for life.

Just to come home again,
to see the face of his newborn child.
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Submitted: May 9
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~Darklaw13:iconDarklaw13: May 9, 2008, 10:57:01 AM
Deep.

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~ash-2-thunder:iconash-2-thunder: May 9, 2008, 1:35:17 PM
aww
babies......
rickshaw would be a cool name

those words mean my approval for this poem. :)
~diamond-on-the-water:icondiamond-on-the-water: May 9, 2008, 8:44:00 PM
haha thanks! :)
rickshaws are actually these sort of small wagon-like vehicles that people in Calcutta ride to get from place to place, and these guys pull them for a living. i read about it in national geographic and then decided to write a poem about it.
~ash-2-thunder:iconash-2-thunder: May 11, 2008, 5:44:49 PM
ohhhhhh yeah now it's call coming back to me



haha coming.
=Veggie-BurgerQueen:iconVeggie-BurgerQueen: May 14, 2008, 12:56:23 PM
Aww.
I have such a clear mental image from reading this.
Really well done :)

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=Veggie-BurgerQueen:iconVeggie-BurgerQueen: May 24, 2008, 4:12:43 AM
You're welcome!

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I don't mean to sound cold or cruel or vicious, but I am, so that's the way it comes out.
Professional help is being sought.